somewhere in between: some poetry...

mood: inspired, neutral, indifferent

so i've decided to post some of my own poetry on here.... might as well, and people can comment and critique if you want :)

here's one:

and rain will fall

as silence does

into the impossible

into night

stained fingertips

slowly drying

blazing sun

finally setting

one pale sky

two shades of red

and seven counts

to end.

so, that one's a bit more like poetry than others. which are more like very strange rantings. but yeah...

the cure is sung to me in an eternal line of sunless school children crossing the street their feet going pit pat pit pat rain coming down around my ankles pool thoughts playing hide and seek with my head across the pavement to a red door marked with a scar on my finger when a car crash when i was four days ago i knew i was crazy but now im not so sure of the tempo of that song in that pair of eyes following me around listening to what i say through the walls of hotel rooms when i keep missing the beat of your heart i guess were just not meant to be here just take my hand and follow me into the depths of thought into the depths of my mind i get lost there too don't breathe too hard fearing the light at the end we're not even close yet...

and there is some ranting of mine

and here's one more for the time being:

dagger-like hands

dragging me down

how do you paint

desperation

how do you express

pain

laugh insanely

is all i can do

the wind left me

alone in the dark

alone with the hands

clawing at my throat

clawing at my fingers

clawing at the feeling

you couldn't ever understand

ok... yes, i am slightly disturbed. slightly insane. i'm ok with it. i just deal, and live life how i want to. yep. comment if you like, no flaming though please. it's just stupid and hateful and rude. don't bother.

thanks for reading :)

here are a few a loverly pictures for your enjoyment xD

ehe.... greg corner... :P

and mat devine (who happens to be divine ahaha sorry for the punnyness XD